Here we go..
So you just stole a bunch of animes and combined them? *rolls eyes* You're a very good animator, don't get me wrong, you've got lots of talent, but I think you can place your talent better than this. As a whole, this submission was a great display of your skill, but you need to work on creativity. I mean, I saw full metal alchemist in there, I saw yugioh, the kid with the yugioh thing looked like the lead boy from digimon.. I did however, like the whole cigarette into fire breathing thing, that was very original and done very nicely, even though I hate smoking. I want to see you make an animation just like this one, but more original and less anime-tastic. I'm sure you can pull it off. Keep working.